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[*] Post 378466 posted on 31-5-2009 at 19:39 Reply With Quote
Clean Sheets



CLEAN SHEETS

Crisp white linen, lightly starched,
smoothly ironed. Lace edged,
virginally prim but wickedly inviting,
enticingly cool to touch. Sensuous
with the heady fragrance of fresh air,
lavender, and sunshine. Lying softly
against my skin saving my wanton
nakedness from embarrassing the night air.


(C) Nimuae 2009
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[*] Post 378481 posted on 31-5-2009 at 21:12 Reply With Quote


You wanton woman you! :)
Good contrast between virginal and wanton imo.

My favourite description used by a student this year was "crisp lightbulb whiteness" and your poem reminded me of that.
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[*] Post 378522 posted on 1-6-2009 at 07:53 Reply With Quote


I like that Nimuae. Excellent. :D
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